'Old as she was, she still missed her daddy sometimes'
~ Gloria Naylor
~ Gloria Naylor
xmas 1971 - me, dad, and my sister...
You knocked on the door
Looking old and dishevelled and
Heavy.
You needed a shave and
Haircut.
You said you missed us.
But you didn't say
'Sorry'.
Maybe you never will.
You walked away with
Shoulders stooped.
I felt sad and
Heavy.
'I miss you too'
I whispered
As you faded out of
View...
(Oct 2010)
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Heavy.
You needed a shave and
Haircut.
You said you missed us.
But you didn't say
'Sorry'.
Maybe you never will.
You walked away with
Shoulders stooped.
I felt sad and
Heavy.
'I miss you too'
I whispered
As you faded out of
View...
(Oct 2010)
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I had to include a pic with my mum too! 1971. <3
This is one of the most powerful poems of yours I have ever read.
ReplyDeleteSo few words - so much emotion.
Terrific
David
wow - thank you so much David - your comment means such a lot to me. Writing this helped dissolve some of the pain I was feeling...
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